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Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese.

Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.

Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.

Ka kite ano

Thank you letter 2.

Hi,
This week we have been writing thank you letters to all that supported our big Ski Trip,
Here is the letter I wrote to thank my mother and whoever else paid for my trip.
 Ka kite ano.

6 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Mum and Dad

I am writing to thank you very much for letting  me go on the ski trip last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week and especially rock wall climbing was amazing.My favourite part was making huts with my friends in the snow.

I would really love to go skiing again, one day.

Love from

Tylah xox ♡

Thank you letter 1.

Hi,
This week we have been writing thank you letters to all that supported our big Ski Trip.
Here is the letter I wrote to thank the people at Piper's Lodge.
I think I did a good job but my teacher found some capital letters and fullstops missing and I had to fix them.
Ka kite ano

8 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Piper’s Lodge

I am writing to thank you very much for looking after us so well during our stay last week.

I really like staying at your lodge. It was very nice.

I really enjoyed the whole week because your beds were nice, your bathrooms were clean and fresh and your meals were delicious. My favorite meal was all of them. I really appreciate it!

I hope I can come and stay at Piper’s Lodge again, one day.

Hopefully.

Yours sincerely

Tylah Ratahi