Maths Test Stage 7.

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Here is a copy of my last Basic Fact's Test for the year.
I am working at Level 7 Stage 4.
At the beginning of the year, I was working at Level 5 Stage 2,
I need to work on Factors And Multiples.

Maths.

Kia Ora,
I did a maths test a while ago and these are my results,
my weaknesses were counting forwards in halves its easy but i did not think about that.
I'm good at reading fractions, recall addition and adding to a thousand.

Kia ora

Here is the recount I wrote  for an Asttle writing test in Week 4.  Our teacher marked all our recounts and gave us our scores. Mine came out at Level 3p  which is just above the end of year standard for Year Five. I need to work on punctuation.  

Then we helped each other improve them by reading each other’s recount and talking about them. We also used Revision Assistant to help edit each other’s story and Mrs B added some notes as well. Everyone in our room likes Revision Assistant because it’s easy to understand the marks/ notes that it puts on your writing and so it’s quick for us to go and do the fix-ups. I hope someone will give me some feedback.

Ka kite ano

It was a cloudy Monday. Mike, Mum, and I were catching mullet at Nana and Grandad Kendall's. Mike hopped on the dinghy and threw the net out and it billowed out like an umbrella against the dust of the grey sky. Meanwhile me and my Mother sat on shore. We bought patience while we waited for fish to arrive hoping that there would be some.We picked mangroves and fed the two fat donkeys. Their teeth looked blunt,

although they crushed the mangroves like no other mammal on the earth.

As hours passed I started to grow bored and impatient, groaning like a helpless sheep.And then a miracle happened.  I finished what I am best at when  Mike announced,“We will now pull in the mullet net.”

I wasn’t too hopeful because the floaties were still up. Did we get none??Did we get some? “?No”, Did we get ONE? “Yes.”

It was an absolute pity butt, oh boy, was that one little dumb mullet was yum?

Thank God, Nana Debbie was not there, She would have eaten it all.

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Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese.

Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.

Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.

Ka kite ano

Thank you letter 2.

Hi,
This week we have been writing thank you letters to all that supported our big Ski Trip,
Here is the letter I wrote to thank my mother and whoever else paid for my trip.
 Ka kite ano.

6 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Mum and Dad

I am writing to thank you very much for letting  me go on the ski trip last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week and especially rock wall climbing was amazing.My favourite part was making huts with my friends in the snow.

I would really love to go skiing again, one day.

Love from

Tylah xox ♡

Thank you letter 1.

Hi,
This week we have been writing thank you letters to all that supported our big Ski Trip.
Here is the letter I wrote to thank the people at Piper's Lodge.
I think I did a good job but my teacher found some capital letters and fullstops missing and I had to fix them.
Ka kite ano

8 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Piper’s Lodge

I am writing to thank you very much for looking after us so well during our stay last week.

I really like staying at your lodge. It was very nice.

I really enjoyed the whole week because your beds were nice, your bathrooms were clean and fresh and your meals were delicious. My favorite meal was all of them. I really appreciate it!

I hope I can come and stay at Piper’s Lodge again, one day.

Hopefully.

Yours sincerely

Tylah Ratahi