Hi this week I have been doing descriptive writing with Miss Dixon,
we had to write about a setting and a character using descriptive language to describe the character/setting in a appropriate
way.I enjoyed describing the witch.
Hi Tylah I really like your description of the castle and witch and you have some good ideas. After I read it though, I had some questions in my head:What does 'spartan sense like a disease' mean? Where did the poisonous gas come from? What do the mutant snakes surround, the castle or the lake? Does a hawk surround something or does it circle something? Also, do you think that your writing meets most of the success criteria?
Hi Tylah
ReplyDeleteI really like your description of the castle and witch and you have some good ideas. After I read it though, I had some questions in my head:What does 'spartan sense like a disease' mean? Where did the poisonous gas come from? What do the mutant snakes surround, the castle or the lake? Does a hawk surround something or does it circle something? Also, do you think that your writing meets most of the success criteria?